lunes, 12 de octubre de 2009

The diversity of UK


As far as I am concerned the formation of the United Kingdom was very interesting because it was inhabited with lot of immigrants. The combination between the natives and immigrants made the lands of the United Kingdom richer in terms of agriculture and handicraft as well, because each group of immigrants brought not only their hopes and thoughts, but also their knowledge and abilities to work and survive.

The diversity whereupon the United Kingdom was formed is fantastic because in this land there were already a diverse group of natives and with the arrival of the immigrants the land became even more varied.

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Culture and Civilization I dijo...

Vanesa,

Your ideas are clear. The development of the paragraphs was well achieved.

The post was easy to read. Good job!

I think you could have developed a bit more your ideas. Remember that the length for the post is between 150 and 180 words.

Take care!

Oscar Luna.

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